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Cory Welch's avatar

Loved it! Nice one, Mike!!! Now thinking of how deep the machinations go! Awesome! :)

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Mike Mason's avatar

Thanks Cory, glad you liked it.

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mensan98th's avatar

Deftly handled. The world he inhabits reminds me of Glengarry Glen Ross: a world filled with lacerations and vesicant conflict.

Always

Be

Chasing others with broken bricks

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Chris Allan's avatar

Very well written, this had me hooked wondering where things were going with the waitress.... and then (!)

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